Reflection on my Writing



The fourth blog post that I wrote, titled “I Reviewed an Article and it took a Really Long Time”, is focused on the findings of a study that researched the benefits of making plans in long distance relationships. With this assignment, my thesis was “certainty is something that LDDR couples strive for because of infrequencies in visits and actual physical contact.” I was attempting to highlight the positive side of making plans in any relationship, much more specifically a long distance one. My audience for this post, and all other posts, was college students who happen to be in an LDDR or someone who may be considering one.  I demonstrated my ability to analyze by breaking down the authors arguments in each paragraph, noting his weaknesses and highlighting his strengths. In terms of this article, I think that I worked with the authors work very well, I gave credit where credit was due and I was not afraid to point out the few weaknesses that his claim had.
For our last assignment, the almighty research paper, I chose the pressing issue that is budget cuts in art programs across the United States. With this assignment, I was trying to make my audience aware of the fact that art programs are in dire need of financial attention. My audience for this one would have been my fellow students and maybe even the school board. I responded to them by telling the facts about what is being cut, the effects art has on human development, and the learning process. My thesis statement was, “Today’s visual and performing arts programs are key to sustaining a well developed education for students. When budgets are tight, schools should look in other areas before they decide that the arts are the place to take from.” I feel that my thesis statement was well defined.  It is clear that these ideas are my own and I have outlined a clear context, subject, and claim. I demonstrate my ability analyze all throughout the essay. I took numerous sources and used their information to strengthen my claim. Just as the last, I feel that I worked with another’s work really well, by giving credit where credit is due and by using the sources to back up what I have to say.
My academic writing now, as compared to early in the semester has changed drastically. I am now way more informed on what it takes to write an essay with academic tone, and how to address certain audiences. At the beginning of the year, I would say that my skills on citing sources (especially those in APA format), was less than shady. But now I can do it with ease! In blog post one, I failed to note which ideas where mine and which were the author’s. This is an easy mistake to make, but compared to my most recent work it is silly to think that failing to cite was ever an issue for me. Overall, this class really taught me how to write a college level academic essay. This is a skill I will be using for years to come!

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Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Keep Art Alive: A Budget Crisis


Keep Art Alive: A Budget Crisis


It is a common perception that visual and performing arts are an easy subject, that it is just something that people do for fun and that it harbors no educational value. These perceptions however, are not true.  Today’s visual and performing arts programs are key to sustaining a well-developed education for students. When budgets are tight, schools should look in other areas before they decide that the arts are the place to take from. First, it must be learned what qualifies as visual and performing arts. According to the Collins English Dictionary (2012), visual arts are “created primarily for visual perception, as drawing, graphics, painting, sculpture and the decorative arts”. The Collins Dictionary (2012) also defines performing arts as “arts or skills that require public performance, as acting, singing or dancing.”  
Art in all forms teaches more than just the creative process; it also effects the learning process. It engages parts of the brain that no other subject touches. “When well taught, the arts provide young people with authentic learning experiences that engage their minds, hearts, and bodies. The learning experiences are real and meaningful to them.” (Catterall, 1999, p.12). Hard sciences appeal to the formula based side of thinking, while art appeals to the emotional senses. Hard sciences are important to a complete education as well but one must view visual and performing arts in the same light. They should be considered and treated as equals. In ”Champions of Change” Catterall (1999) states that art connects students to themselves and to the people around them. Not only are students creating for themselves and learning new things, but they are also connecting with peers who are doing the same thing and discovering new aspects about themselves at the same time. Art can also challenge students who do not feel tested with other liberal arts (Catterall, 1999, p.12). It poses new challenges because of the unusual nature of the creative process. The student is stripped of all existing formulas and left to create something new. In the same breath, art promotes self-directed learning, which is an extremely valuable skill to possess for “real world” circumstances. It allows for students to explore for themselves what its like to problem solve on their own. It promotes students to learn for the learning experience not just for test results and performance outcomes (Catterall, 1999).
Not only do the arts effect the learning process, they also have lasting effects on human development. A study done for the Champions of Change shows that involvement in the arts increases high school students’ test scores in various subjects. Simply having the option to enroll in arts classes can raise a students’ ability to learn new information in other subjects. Implementing art programs in schools can engage the “right side” of the brain. But what few know is that both sides of the brain work together at the same time.
There are many myths and misconceptions surrounding the "left brain, right brain" concept. For instance, the belief that "right brained" people are artistic while "left brained" folks are more logical is a bit of an exaggeration. In fact, it is when both sides of the brain are working together that your thinking is at its best (Mayberry, 2012).
Art forces students to think critically, which can also exercise the left side of the brain along with the right, therefore strengthening the logical side of the brain. When viewed closely it is important to notice that visual and performing arts is a completely different form of education than other core academic subjects. In the article “Turtles, Art and Children” Susan Langer says:
Artistic training is the education of feeling, as our visual schooling in factual subjects and logical skills such as mathematical ‘figuring’ or simple argumentation is education of thought. Few people realize that the real education of emotion is not the conditioning effected by social approval or disapproval, but the personal, illuminating contact with symbols of feeling. However, art education is neglected, left to chance, or regarded as a culture veneer.
Langer is stressing that creating art is the education of feeling, and that no other subject can teach a lesson as valuable as that. It is also stated that art is neglected, and viewed as something that people simply do for fun, and holds no real educational value. Art is a breath of fresh air compared to the cut and dry monotony of science and math. The process of creating art is a highly personal experience, not only does the student learn about who they are, they learn about what they are capable of. The creative process can open up doors in the minds of young students and adults alike that would otherwise be untouched. It is uncommon to see any other academic subject teach lessons quite like ones that the arts teach.
One may question, what exactly is being cut from these art programs? According to the article Debating Options for when Arts Get the Squeeze (2009), Jill Massie states “the California State Arts council budget has been slashed from $17.5 million to $1 million. Massie also states that New York City junior highs are cutting arts and other electives for more classroom time in math and reading.” It should be stressed that math and reading along with other core subjects are indeed important, but visual and performing arts are equally as important as those core subjects. Lastly, Massie discloses, “the Arizona legislature cut $7 million in arts funding.” Ryan Hurley of the article Cuts in Art Programs Leave Sour Note in Schools (2004), says that “the Westside Academy will most likely have to return a $25,000 grant for its music program donated by VH1’s Save the Music that they used to purchase a piano lab, because the school no longer employs a full-time music teacher.” These cuts are just a few of the numerous declining budgets around the United States.  When schools are looking at program budgets they should keep in mind the impact that art has on students. This is why schools should implement an even budget cut policy. It is not fair for just one program to get slashed so heavily, let alone one that holds this much impact on the learning process and human development. Theoretically, each program would have less money taken from their budgets if money is being eliminated from every department. To most people, these massive budget cuts are a non-issue because they are ill informed. It would seem that most of today’s population is unaware of the cuts. The best solution to eliminating such drastic cuts would be to raise awareness in your community and propose the prospect of an even budget cut policy to the school board. Students should never be deprived of such a rich experience.
There is nothing quite like the personal experience and self discovery that visual and performing arts brings to students, and to everyone for that matter. School boards should acknowledge that the benefits of enrolling in arts classes are just as valuable as the lessons learned in core academic subjects such as math, science and English. Visual and performing arts is key to a students’ full education. While it is a different type of instruction, it should be praised for the unique lessons and experience in the “real world” that it provides. Visual and performing arts teaches the education of emotion. Both sides of the brain work together when creating art, therefore both the right and left side of the brain are strengthened in the process. Art matters to students and the teachers instructing them. It should never be viewed as something that is considered “easy” or simply a “cultural veneer”. School boards need to understand that they have put price on self-discovery and imagination. Art in all forms is important and everyone should acknowledge this.


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